https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1c7kw8uG8O0HdG6eQ7JXjRAkWokysJ7Xl9_XbnJLIXlk/edit#slide=id.p
This story is about a evil carrot and a super bean. They both fight what happens is the evil carrot is trying to kill the super bean. Then super falls to the ground and then the evil carrot runs away and in to the desert town.
I am a student at Wigram Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, 17 August 2018
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Hi Caleb and it's Ronav. I like the way you added lots of description. Maybe next time you could add more action about what Mr Bean did to the evil carrot. This reminds me of when I made my comic.
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