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Thursday, 13 June 2019

Petter climbing


Petter is 20 he had Black hair. Petter was stretching his arms and reached for the thick rope. When Petter reached the top of mt cook he felt sick because he looked down and he said “I am going to be sick”. He was so high up



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2 comments:

  1. Caleb i like the way you described the character good work i am not scared of heights like petter

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  2. Hi Caleb I like the way you describe Petter nicely. Maybe you should add more description about Petter. This work reminds me of rock climbing.

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