1.has "once upon a time" and introduces the main character
2.say where they live
3.say there talent
4.tell the problem
5. tell how they felt
6.tell how they got over the problem
this is my six sentence
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Caleb
ReplyDeleteNice job..how about a whole story in six WORDS? There have been several writing competitions over the years that asked for six word stories.. I'd love to see what you made of that.
Keep up the great work.
Hi Caleb, I like the way you put pictures. I think you should put a capital letter on Tokyo because its a name of a city. This work reminds me of when I did a six sentences too.
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