Tuesday, 13 March 2018
the shoe maker with the mean shoe maker
The tiny hard working shoe maker lived in a shoe shop A big guy stole the tiny shoe shop customers by the shoes then they had a contest after that the tiny shoe maker made golden and shiny shoes last the golden shiny shoes made the tall customer selter run away and never came back and a shoe cart pulled up...
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hi Caleb it's me Levi i love the detail and that but more detail need's to be in the story so if you can tell me or i can help with your work some time well bye now
ReplyDeletecool work caleb. but you foget to put the where the shoes came alive
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